SOLAR ECLIPSE - reflection

thoughts on last weeks words

SOLAR ECLIPSE takes the reader on a journey that explores themes of divinity, nature, and the transient nature of existence. The title itself, with its celestial reference, sets the stage for an exploration of grand and cosmic themes.

The repetition of the phrase "god of gales and gravity and granite" creates a rhythmic cadence, emphasizing the vastness of the divine and its influence over various elements. The use of alliteration adds to the musicality of the poem, drawing attention to the power and breadth of the god being invoked. The mention of "many sensitive creatures wear the crown of glass" introduces a delicate and vulnerable imagery, suggesting that even amidst divine power, fragility exists.

The poet then shifts to the natural world with the mention of the sumac and its red hue, marking a specific season. The reference to "goldenrod and aster hillsides" paints a vivid picture of nature in its full bloom, highlighting the cyclical and ever-changing aspects of the environment. The incorporation of specific flora adds a tangible dimension to the poem, grounding the cosmic themes in the tangible world.

The address to the "father of the universe" elevates the scope of the words, connecting the earthly experience to the vastness of the cosmos. The directive to "walk alongside an unknown friend" introduces a sense of companionship and mystery, inviting readers to contemplate their relationship with the unknown and the divine.

The phrase "this time, a passive observer" introduces a shift in perspective, portraying the speaker as one who, rather than actively participating, is now a spectator. The act of "holding hands, as if waiting for the end of something" conveys a profound sense of anticipation and perhaps resignation. This image of unity in the face of an impending conclusion creates a poignant moment in the poem.

The final lines, with their reference to "elbows, skulls, forms - remnants of a fool's errand," suggest the impermanence of human endeavors. The use of body parts as remnants adds a visceral quality, underscoring the ephemeral nature of existence and the potentially futile nature of certain pursuits.

These words weave together themes of divinity, nature, and existential reflection. The cosmic imagery and evocative language create a tapestry that invites readers to ponder the interplay between the divine and the earthly, the transient and the enduring. The poem serves as a meditation on the mysteries of existence and the cyclical nature of life.

(text for audio)

SOLAR ECLIPSE

god of

gales and

gravity and

granite and

many sensitive 

creatures wear 

the crown

of glass

where the sumac

was

red 

season of 

goldenrod and

aster hillsides

father of 

the universe

walk alongside an

unknown

friend

though this

time , a 

passive observer

hold hands ,

as if

waiting for

the end

of something

elbows , skulls , forms - 

remnants

of

a fools 

errand

=

thank you kindly,

-mike